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[TRON]

ว่างๆขอเอาไปคิดทำนองเล่นๆได้มั๊ยครับ แต่ดูเนื้อเพลงแล้วท่าทางจะร้องออกมายากนะครับ แต่ละท่อนยาวจริงๆ 

[ǝɹoɔǝsıɐuuoʎɐɯʎɹbuɐ]

ว่างๆขอเอาไปคิดทำนองเล่นๆได้มั๊ยครับ แต่ดูเนื้อเพลงแล้วท่าทางจะร้องออกมายากนะครับ แต่ละท่อนยาวจริงๆ 

ไม่ยากหรอกครับ ลองนึกถึงชุด Amused to Death ดูก็ได้ครับ เนื้อร้องยาวๆแต่แทบไม่ต้องมีเมโลดี้ร้องเลย 

[ǝɹoɔǝsıɐuuoʎɐɯʎɹbuɐ]

"Solitary Fear"

Lyrics by: Lilium

I’m fear of eternity
This dormitory, solitary
I’m fear of my own gaze
Gazing in the dark, the creepy haze
Wake up fear, I’m all alone
My shaking my has turned to stone
I’m fear of obscurity
The midnight mystery, my enemy
Holding hands of emptiness
A man of nothingface, crawling in
I heard the cry, the baby’s cry
The lullaby, somewhere in time
Red dust shadows, the bloody rotten wine
I’m looking up, up in the sky
Canopy of stars, they ask me “why?”
And I heard the sound of screaming boy
He is walking around here, so near
Suffocate my will to live
Asphyxiate my will to leave
I’m growing fear……

[ǝɹoɔǝsıɐuuoʎɐɯʎɹbuɐ]

"Forever of the Stars"

Lyrics by: Lilium

The game is over
The recluse will be weeping his tears
Singing the song of eternity
Disappeared serenity

Since the day she passed away
So fast and I cannot cope with life and the anguish and pain
I wish the light of stars can heal my deepest scars

The song is over
Forever of the stars shining bright
Eternal moves of my insanity
The greatest deadly melancholy

Worthless advice from the book I’ve read and I cannot let go
The stars, the flickering light will be blown away
I beg the forever of the last star in the sky

The pain is over
Her soul reaching up the sky high
Counting our memories eternally
The impossible remedy

[ǝɹoɔǝsıɐuuoʎɐɯʎɹbuɐ]

"White Ink"

Lyrics by: Lilium

I’m writing in white
The paper blind
The paper lies, pure reason why
The revolution merging into these words
But you cannot see, the paper bird is flying free
Ode to the spirit white, raging like pure mercury
Liquidization of words from the sharpest pen

I’m writing in white, I’m shouting silence to the sky
Everything must go, but no one able to see
You’re spreading pain, and I’m trying to break free
But my will to speak is worthlessly

White ink, flattened plain, stand alone
Deliverance of words, born blinded on this paper

I’m writing in white, I’m speaking reasonless twice
Falling down the hole, the bottomless hole
Revolutionist, cannot breaking free this time
And no one care what would happened

Today, the white ink, still no one see
Living life fighting alone, the writer only has the quietest moan....

[TRON]

ว่างๆขอเอาไปคิดทำนองเล่นๆได้มั๊ยครับ แต่ดูเนื้อเพลงแล้วท่าทางจะร้องออกมายากนะครับ แต่ละท่อนยาวจริงๆ 

ไม่ยากหรอกครับ ลองนึกถึงชุด Amused to Death ดูก็ได้ครับ เนื้อร้องยาวๆแต่แทบไม่ต้องมีเมโลดี้ร้องเลย 

อ๋อ ถ้างั้นจะไปทางร้องแกมพูดแบบโรเจอร์ วอร์เตอร์ อันนี้คงต้องยกให้น้าเค้าคนเดียว (อ้อ บ๊อป ดีแลน กับ มาร์ค นอฟเลอร์ด้วย) 

[ǝɹoɔǝsıɐuuoʎɐɯʎɹbuɐ]

“She, Ghost”

Lyrics By: Lilium

Throwing myself out of bound
I’m about to leaving this town
The steel raindrops hit the foreground
She loves this sound
Waking up in the zinced cottage
Suburbia, Industrial waste
And I can’t skip this wicked page
The cold wind still whipping my edge

*She loves this place
She loves in everywhere I go
Even in enclosed space
She still feels my agony
She loves me
But the order from the sky told me to leave
She loves me
She waits for the long lost embrace
So I let go…

At the ruins of the church
The grave of dying birds
I’m lying on the rusty floor
Ignore the open door
She loves me, She try to touch
But it’s the worthless willing waste
I’m building up the hollow cage
No more tears, No more pain
No warm embrace at the greatest plain

*She loves this place
She loves in everywhere I go
Waiting for the long lost embrace
But she can’t even touch my breathe
She loves me, She cries for me
But all the memories won’t remain
She loves me, She died for me
So I let go…


 

[ǝɹoɔǝsıɐuuoʎɐɯʎɹbuɐ]

“Love Lust Machinery”

Lyrics by: Lilium

Go straight the avenue to the place we called “The Somberville”
We catch the train from east to west
Drilling hole, the empty space
Filling space with freshy lust, turning innocence from dust to dust
On the Cadillac, on the bus
The dull villagers will be busted
Oh, to see the Technicolor dream
Oh, to taste the flavor of her poisoned lips

*We crawling through the field of razorblade
We crawling to you
Are you strong enough?
Who will let the sunlight shine through my room?
To stop this game of lust

The limpid pink machinery, the darkest skyhigh assembly
We holding hands of sympathy and humming harmful melodies
Playing the hollow and formless style
Filling the glass with rotten wine
Someone believe this is a crime
But let me stand the other side
Oh, to play with her virginal skin
Oh, to draining the water of insanity

*We tiptoe to the world of shadows fall
We crawling in you
Are you strong enough?
Who will try to separate the way we stuck?
To stop this game of lust
 

 

[ǝɹoɔǝsıɐuuoʎɐɯʎɹbuɐ]

“Yokohama”

Lyrics by: Lilium

Into the spacious world we belong
To feel the freezing wind and switchblade sting
She was standing there for too long
Invisible is growing in the deepest core

Far from the downtown party we belong
She’s gazing at me with her grey eyes that so strong
The water is still, cold and dark as steel sheets
Holding our last breath until the end of days

Apocalypse, the crack in our hearts
The sea is listening to our silence oath of nothingness
Far out of sight at the horizon
No future shining bright
Only the cold wind will know our fate
No god, no prophets
The waterline, the sleepless night
We lost the skyline, we lost our mind
We lost our ways the back home again
So the sea is watching….

The sea is watching us
The buildings crumbling down
The waves remaining
The memories bringing back
The ships are sinking
The floor is cracking
The space exploding
The fire is burning
The mind destructing
And the world is breaking……

So the sea is watching.....

[Terryl]

พลังงานเยอะจริงๆ

อยากย้อนเวลากลับไปสมัยที่เนื้อเพลง+ทำนองมันพรั่งพรูออกมาแบบนี้บ้างจัง

[Winter Rose]

Question


Why she tell me.

I try to think where I'm not good.

Why am I not understanding.

Feel my back again.

We always see the sky but now together again and then it did not.

Under a large tree, and she had me closely correlative.

Now I just alone.

I'm ready to date  it.

The last thing that would not occur.

No words are just a teardrop remaining.

This word or answer.

You think back to that again in the chapter.

My beloved is like burning a whole.

She she wanted to go.

I look at this. Can only wait.

It never continue to like then.

I assured.

Now I'm ready to  it.

I do not want something that will change.

I think that she is always beside me.

But now it does not then another.

She is from me.

I've never forgotten it.

Sit back see myself in a room with the availability of hunting.

It then continued to the end.

Tell yourself that it must try to catch one's manly tears.

From the look she sit with him.

This is  she returns to me.

It is just enough of it she will be worthless in the eyes.

But for me I still love she

[Winter Rose]

why wait


I wait a long time when she Rai thick.

She will return to.

I'm suffering with patience.

I do not care how painful that is.

We just feel that she is still me.

Is comfortable enough.

Heartbreaking to wait.

Why am I still waiting.

Backpacks, it may be because of love remaining.

How long to even.

I will also be  she wait.

Be asked to sit back themselves.

I still waiting for return.

She had not seen the importance of me.

But I still love she .

Heartbreaking to wait.

Why am I still waiting.

May be because it is a love remaining.

Although likely to be How long will I still would she wait.

How long, though I still be waiting.

And it is never possible.

But still  hopeful.

Little bit of it.

Like stars among the stars. She loves me still.

[Winter Rose]

Knife?


come again. Begin to emit light in the room.

I rise to sit on the couch. This ..  it hopeless then.

My bleary eyes Plea me dizzy with the things that I am.

I worry for the room I started out psychological blackness.

My room started becoming gray I start up from bed.

I go to waver waver the door to hand me a cold start.

External environment makes me feel cold.

What I do not think out. No one understands this world continue in me.

I .... hopeless ....

Blade started to scream on my neck.

  ... Not continue  hurts a little ...

My feelings started fade.

Air around the cooling starts.

I have no hand movement.

Blood flowing out slowly.

My eyes slowly sleeping into .....

This is my feeling real  last.

Who does not want to continue there beside me.

or is this my end.

feel like the last remaining.

I would have love from people who laundry.

But now it just the weather I wait for a friend.

Blade started to scream on my neck.

... Feel. Start fade ...

This continued last.

Cooling air around me.

I did not move the body.


Blood flowing out slowly.

My eyes slowly fall asleep.

I would not come again  the end I ask only this.

Or that I die ... really?

I feel that images of the brain white โผลน started to rise all over my floor.

My heart stops beating to begin slowly.

I continued it's death only this end .. or is it just beginning

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[TRON]

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[ǝɹoɔǝsıɐuuoʎɐɯʎɹbuɐ]

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